76. using →used 此處表示被動含義，be used for“被用來去做”。

　　77. becoming前加of 固定短語: dream of 夢想做某事。

　　78. the →a 固定短語：in a short time在短時間內(nèi)。

　　79. our→ his 此處指叔叔的生意，用his指代。

　　80. stead→steadily Grow指增長，不是系動詞，故用副詞修飾。

　　考點：短文改錯

　　第二節(jié) 書面表達(滿分25分)

　　假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個人簡歷(resume)。給外教Mr Jenkins 寫信，請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)

　　注意：

　　1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

　　2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，已使行文連貫。

　　【答案】

　　Dear Ms Jenkins,

　　I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.

　　In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.

　　Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【亮點】 本文是一篇較為優(yōu)秀的范文。格式正確，要點全面，語言通順流暢，很好地完成了寫作任務(wù)。在本文中開頭提出寫信的目的，然后具體講述自己的困難，再提出請求，最后表達自己的感激之情。所以在內(nèi)容上邏輯性較強。此外，作者還使用了不定式短語In order to get some practical experience,、現(xiàn)在分詞短語hoping you can give me some help、賓語從句if there are something to pay attention to等。經(jīng)典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume也是文章的亮點所在。

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